A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, insisting he has proof that one of them is a government agent.

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kbfilmworks Samurai Asked on September 27, 2015 in Thriller.
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I’d put it in term of action.

A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, by convince the group their is a traitor in their ranks.

saying insisting doesn’t show the impact on the group.

CraigDGriffiths Mentor Reviewed on September 27, 2015.
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Thanks, CraigDGriffiths. Exactly what is needed.

kbfilmworks Samurai Reviewed on September 27, 2015.
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Start with the inciting incident:

“When a group of young activists abduct a senior politician, and … murder confession”

Then you’ll see that there is a lack of story material for Act 2: all we have here is that “he insists he has proof that one of them is a government agent”.

In other words, this logline is super heavy towards the setup, but doesn’t promise much after that.

Karel Segers Samurai Reviewed on September 27, 2015.
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Thanks, Karel. Much appreciated.

“A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession as part of a clever scheme to extort millions but he turns the game around by convincing them that there’s a traitor in their ranks and the proof is in a security briefcase along with the millions in his safe deposit box”.

kbfilmworks Samurai Reviewed on September 28, 2015.
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