A behind the scenes look at a talk show for women that men secretly love to watch.

    jlmarevalo Logliner Asked on October 5, 2015 in Comedy.
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      This is may be a tag line but not a logline.
      The fundamental purpose of a logline is to describe a plot which means it needs at bare minimum to include a main character, an inciting incident and an outer goal with a causal connection.

      The next draft should include these elements in order to receive constructive feedback about the logline and concept.

      Hope this helps.

      Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on October 5, 2015.
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        Yes it does thanks. I figured it as such and trying to rewrite it in a better…

        jlmarevalo Logliner Reviewed on October 5, 2015.
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