After a peculiar foreigner buys back her freedom from the king of Jericho, a desperate young prostitute tries to free her enslaved family before the fabled city is destroyed by an Israelite army.
“When a desperate young prostitute’s family is enslaved in Jericho, she must…”
Also, ‘facing overwhelming odds’ is too generic for a logline. EVERY great story has a main character facing overwhelming odds.
Be as specific as you can be within the word count.
I like the ticking clock/racing against time.
I know this sounds pedantic, but you’ll make a better impression if you close every sentence with a full stop.
Without it, it feels as if you rushed this logline…