A retired father and his daughter must forgive previous tensions to work together to prevent his other daughters from selling the family business.

The Bar

CraigDGriffiths Summitry Asked on September 13, 2015 in Public.
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Doh…. Hamlet my favourite and I got it wrong.

CraigDGriffiths Summitry Reviewed on September 16, 2015.
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Neat.

dpg Singularity Reviewed on October 2, 2015.
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You should put the inciting incident first

“When his eldest daughter puts his beloved family bar on the market, a retired barkeep seeks the help of his estranged youngest daughter to convince her sibling not to sell.”

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on September 14, 2015.
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“When his eldest daughter puts his beloved family bar on the market, a retired barkeep reluctantly seeks the help of his estranged youngest daughter, who’s the only lawyer he can afford.”

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on September 14, 2015.
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