"A group of high school friends must deal with a zombie out break, that they predicted."
Dave: “How exactly will the school friends ‘deal’ with the breakout? Would they have guns? Also, who does the story focus on – I can only imagine an ensemble piece but there is usually a main focus in such films. I don’t know how important it is that they predicted it either. In the logline I guess the break out is the inciting incident but I don’t know where the story will go afterwards.”