A hitman finds himself sharing a booth in a small town diner with the mobster who hired him and his proposed victim. The killer takes a liking to his target and turns down the job, which doesn’t sit well with his employer. That’s when the guns come out and he has to do some fast talking before things turn deadly.

stumptown Penpusher Asked on December 9, 2015 in Drama.
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This describes the climatic moment, but I think the heart of the logline is just the second second sentence.

TheBear Logliner Reviewed on December 11, 2015.
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This would make a good short film. Single scene done.

But if you are thinking feature, focus on his main goal after the twist.  Then what is stopping him from reaching that goal.

“A hitman decides to save rather than kill his victim which makes them both targets of his boss”.

CraigDGriffiths Overlord Reviewed on December 12, 2015.

Thanks for the review, Craig. Actually, this is a short, but it’d be fun to expand it into a feature with this possibly being the final scene.

on December 13, 2015.
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