A New York-based, coke-addicted DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town.
The logline sets up a situation for a possibly interesting plot, but I think the plot needs to be fleshed out.. What specifically becomes his dramatic problem, hence, his objective goal, as a result of hiding in a small Iowa town? (And is he placed in Iowa before or after snitching? This needs clarification as it makes a big difference in the how the plot might unfold.)
Thank you. It is before he has had a chance to testify.