A professor goes antiquing and finds a golden credenza that melts Nazis so the USA keeps it forever.

    Raiders of the Lost Ark

    Lowell Penpusher Asked on October 26, 2015 in Examples.
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      This logline doesn’t have an inciting incident or goal and therefore fails to describe a plot. Further more the MC lacks a character flaw description and as a result there is no implication of an inner journey.

      I think best to re draft this logline with the above information included.

      Hope this helps.

      Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on October 26, 2015.
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        A swashbuckling American archaeologist must find the Ark of the Covenant before the Nazis do and harness its legendary power.
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        RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK

        dpg Singularity Reviewed on October 26, 2015.
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