A self confident hitman relives along a nightmarish night the killing of his last victim.
I don’t understand what you mean by “relives”.
“To undergo or experience again, especially in the imagination”.
I can’t imagine what the movie will be about… twice the same killing in the same way? In the reality?
I’m confused. Or are you trying to say that the movie starts with the man who have killed his victim and ‘remember’ all he did? If this is the case you should build the logline telling what happened instead of explaining the design principle of the movie.
Anyway, even the ‘story driven’ movies have well defined characters, goals, antagonists.
I heard good things about “schneider vs bax” where a “easy” contract becomes tragically(comically) “hard”.
“On his birthday, a hitman reluctantly takes on the easy task of killing a writer, only to find the job a lot more difficult than expected”. (from imdb – this is a teasing logline not a perfect working logline)
I thought that –“reality” – would means something more subjective than – reality – mostly if placed after – nightmarish – . However, “reality” is not in the logline.
I don’t understand why you “don’t understand what you mean by “relives”“, as you give the best definition of this: “To undergo or experience again, especially in the imagination”. I thought this were clear enough.
Who’s the antagonist? maybe himself, maybe the story (“the plot is a conspiracy against the hero”), maybe something else…