A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

You Are Beautiful

Lucius Paisley Logliner Asked on August 15, 2014 in Public.
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Yes, it’s sloppy as hell, but it’s been 5 hours and it’s past 2am. There’s more to it, but it became too verbose even though it feels like I’ve left out very important pieces to get this far. But, if we can work from here, I can see if anything needs to be swapped out or whatever…

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on August 15, 2014.
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Why must he find the killer, why not the police or FBI? Is there something stopping him from going to the authorities?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on August 15, 2014.
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See, THAT’S the part I had to leave out – his way of making amends is by giving every woman from his past a business type card that only says ‘You Are Beautiful’, which leads the authorities to him as the prime suspect – in short, they track the cards to the maker, the maker names the womaniser – so not only does he want to clear his name, he wants to do it before he’s no longer capable.

And don’t give me any of this “if he’s going to die anyway, why does he care?” crap… đŸ™‚

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on August 15, 2014.
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“After he’s framed for the murder of his ex-girlfriend, a serial womanizer must discover who the killer is while fighting a terminal illness.”

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on August 15, 2014.
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Excellent, I can work with that. Then maybe shorten it a bit and try to squeeze in another story element…

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on August 15, 2014.
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