a terminally ill man sets out to take revenge on people from his past. But to his frustration they are dying before he can get to them.

Revenge

CraigDGriffiths Overlord Asked on September 17, 2015 in Comedy.
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To take revenge on those responsible for his illness, a dying man must find a cure before they all die from the same thing.

Maybe?

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on September 17, 2015.
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What’s the genre? It could be better as a dark comedy.

I miss a clear inciting incident. Maybe the illness?

And what kind of conflit could fuel the story?

When a small burocrate is diagnosed of a deadly brain cancer, he sets out to take revenge on people from his past only to find they’re all already dead.

FFF Mentor Reviewed on September 17, 2015.
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Yep dark comedy.

CraigDGriffiths Overlord Reviewed on September 17, 2015.
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Some people (my brother included) say that there is freedom to cancer. Having a reduced future frees you to do what you want. This guy is an up tight person who snaps and let’s go. It is a comedy. I have a series of ideas I am yet to string together.

CraigDGriffiths Overlord Reviewed on September 17, 2015.
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I have to say, the premise made me chuckle. But the log line is mostly all setup, or at least the first 30 minutes. He’s dying, he decides to get revenge, but his targetsĀ are dying first. Then what?

steveylang Samurai Reviewed on September 25, 2015.
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