A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

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gokulthedreamer Penpusher Asked on December 6, 2015 in Thriller.
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i think we need a lit bit more of the external plot in the logline.  Here it just sounds like an introspective journey…who is the enemy he will have to face to wield this knowledge in order to win?

seanamulvihill Logliner Reviewed on December 7, 2015.
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Ok, now tell me in half as many words.

seanamulvihill Logliner Reviewed on December 10, 2015.
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Yep, more details are needed about the plot.  What is the protagonist’s objective goal? Who is the antagonist that stands in his way or who must he overcome?  What are the stakes?

dpg Singularity Reviewed on December 9, 2015.
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Thank You… made a lotta sense…!

Here i go again:

A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a Retiring-Celebrated Police-Officer!). But he is on the ‘Other-Side’ of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect. The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?

gokulthedreamer Penpusher Reviewed on December 10, 2015.
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