After being accused of murder, a naive woman must overcome fear and flee her sheltered world in search of the truth, only to discover she may be the worlds greatest assassin.

Raised by Wolves

Paul Clarke Samurai Asked on November 3, 2012 in Public.
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Intriguing stuff. I’m not sure the overcoming fear bit is actually necessary though, it’s a bit vague to me. Why not call her a ‘fearful’ woman and cover her naiivit√© with that as well? Just from this one liner though, I’d watch it!

GriffUK Default Reviewed on November 4, 2012.
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I’m not sure i like the description of her character ‘naive’ I wonder if there is a better way to describe her.
Is she a mother? What’s her career? If she were a mum that would be cool. Lots to leave behind and also to fight for!

After being accused of murder, a mother has no choice but to leave behind everything she knows in search of the truth, that she may be the greatest assassin in the world.

A bit long but it makes her sound stronger. Hope this helps x

TanyaH Default Reviewed on November 5, 2012.
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