After being taken by a sadistic boy, a toy sheriff with an annoying space toy must find a way back to the real owner.

Klintbom Penpusher Asked on October 8, 2015 in Examples.
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The funny thing about TOY STORY is trying to connote in a smooth way that the leads are action figure type toys. I think ‘space toy’ comes off a bit weird, it could be a flying saucer. How about “…and his annoying astronaut sidekick”?

steveylang Samurai Reviewed on October 8, 2015.
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After being taken by a sadistic boy, a toy sheriff and his annoying astronaut sidekick must find a way back to the real owner.

Klintbom Penpusher Reviewed on October 8, 2015.
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