After tipping off police to his brother’s latest heist, a torn man must struggle to escape the consequences while keeping the loot; but when his brother is released on bail, he must learn where his true loyalty lies before losing the people most dear to him.
These emotional stakes are a little vague, who are these people? Being specific is all important as it helps set tone. His wife, has different tone to his kids and completely different to friends.
How does he lose them? Are they going to be killed?
I need to know how things will happen? What are the consequences?
Is crime the family business?
These questions are the best advice I can offer at the moment.