An amateur TV writer must follow the clues that the creator of the most popular mystery TV show hid within his series, after he mysteriously disappears, to find the script for the last episode before it is set to air.

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Moses99 Mentor Asked on August 28, 2015 in Public.
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I’m having trouble understanding it and the comas make it more confusing.  I think it might work better if you put the events in chronological order.  Maybe like this:
When the creator a popular mystery TV show disappears an amateur TV writer must follow the the creator’s clues which are hidden within his series to find the script for the last episode before it airs.

But I’m still confused.  Who disappears?  The writer or the creator?  And which one is the main character?

Wayne Samurai Reviewed on June 14, 2016.
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Why? Why must he find the script? Is the script missing? This is not clear. Is the last episode ready to air without the script? Has the last episode already been made? Why don’t any of the actors in the show have their own script? Surely they have to learn their lines before they film the episode.

As you may have guessed, this is a bunch of confusing stuff.

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on August 29, 2015.
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Does this make more sense: “An amateur crime writer must follow the clues that the creator of the most popular mystery novels hid within his series, after he mysteriously disappears, to find the missing manuscript for the final novel in the series before it is set to be released.”

Moses99 Mentor Reviewed on August 29, 2015.
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Since in that case (generally) only a single manuscript would exist, yes, that makes much more sense.

Especially if the story is set pre-internet, or perhaps even pre-digital age when not everybody had a printer in their home.

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on August 29, 2015.
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Yeah i could definitely see this as a 40s style Film Noir thanks man

Moses99 Mentor Reviewed on August 29, 2015.
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