A medical engineer struggles to return to earth after debris crashes into the space shuttle, leaving her drifting alone in space. GRAVITY

dpg Singularity Asked on November 9, 2015 in Examples.

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The IMDB summary/logline is : A medical engineer and an astronaut work together to survive after a catastrophe destroys their shuttle and leaves them adrift in orbit. (22 words, 136 characters).  Short enough, but the IMDB entry targets a different market, movie viewers rather than movie makers (producers, directors, actors, agents)  And what movie makers want to know differs from that of a viewing audience. (For example, what actors and their agents want to know  first and foremost is if there is a leading role they might want to consider.)

Even though the IMDB entry indicates it’s a dual protagonist film, when I consider the factors of screen time and role prominence it seems to me the plot clearly belongs to one character, the female medical engineer.  Hence, for the purposes of  a logline, I would consider her to be the protagonist.

on November 9, 2015.
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The elegance of the concept can be seen in the brevity of it’s logline, though I can’t say I found this to be an incredible story. It was an incredibly well made film with a strong high concept at it’s base, one that stands as a shining example of technology used to enhance story telling. However, in it’s most basic form, it’s a simplistic survival story with a marginal inner journey.

I digress!

I would switch the order around in the logline to reflect the plot more accurately:
” After debris crashes into her space shuttle and leaves her drifting alone in space, a medical engineer struggles to return to earth.”

Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on November 9, 2015.

Definitely a good example of a high concept, one that a reader can immediately grasp and that invokes visuals of the struggle.

I like your polish.  I framed mine to place her dramatic problem 1st — which I take to be the story hook — the cause 2nd.  Whatever.

And, yeah, a marginal inner journey.  Frankly, it seemed contrived to me, inserted into the script because, well, that’s the way a story is supposed to be constructed.

One man’s opinion.

on November 10, 2015.
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