On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

The Uncles – Love is Love

DaddyBear Mark Default Asked on August 25, 2015 in Public.
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This logline leaves far too many questions as opposed to giving us an idea of the story.

– Who is ‘the family?’ Do you mean ‘a family? or even the Mafia?!!
– What is the 50 year anniversary of their favourite uncles? I dont understand what that means. Is it a same sex wedding anniversary between two uncles?
– What kind of issues are we talking about? Homophobia?

I genuinely have no idea what this is about so I apologise if I am way off base here.

typingfilms Penpusher Reviewed on August 25, 2015.
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Fair enough – things for me to think about.
Thank you

DaddyBear Mark Default Reviewed on August 25, 2015.
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No problem, I’ve learnt from this site that literally every single word counts. Update the logline and resubmit it and I’m sure you will get plenty of good advice.

typingfilms Penpusher Reviewed on August 25, 2015.
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Done and done 🙂

DaddyBear Mark Default Reviewed on August 25, 2015.
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It would be interesting to know what the issues are so that we get an idea of the subject matter, the stakes, the theme? You also say ‘some’ not all, so who are the some?

typingfilms Penpusher Reviewed on August 25, 2015.
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