"I examine the idea that Angels make worlds through a game known as 'Marbles,' in their free time. "

Spheres

jamesmichael Penpusher Asked on April 9, 2012 in No Category.
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Steven: “I wish I did not have to examine this idea as it is marbles. If this is meant to be some ultra-spoofy comedy, then better to have the story about some retired and doting gods who play ‘marbles’ (lawn bowls?) with planets … And planet Earth is now being marked for play. Throw in a bumbling, but likeable, mortal protagonist and you will then have a viable ultra-spoof.”

Default Reviewed on April 11, 2012.
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Robin: “Doesn’t interest me personally. I can’t begin to guess what the story could be. Although it is original, it’s possible to be too original.”

Default Reviewed on April 11, 2012.
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Hi James, I find this a very intriguing concept, but it is not a logline as such 🙁 If you haven’t already, check out http://logline.it/sample-page/ for hints(?)

Default Reviewed on April 11, 2012.
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