Starbuck is full of himself according to his dead father, mother and especially sister. He runs into walls all the time, but deep down he just wants to be a good man. That begins to show when he meets Paris, a young lady, working on her bucket list.

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Starbuck

erez Penpusher Asked on November 24, 2015 in Drama.
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When you say Starbuck, are you talking about the character from Battlestar Galactica?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on November 24, 2015.

No Starbuck is a character in a new film I’m working on. His father named him after Captain Ahabs first mate Starbuck

on November 24, 2015.

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on December 1, 2015.
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The usual m.o. in a logline is to NOT name the protagonist.  What matters in a logline is a character’s role in the plot — what they do — not what their name is. I certainly see no reason why this logline merits being an exception to that rule.

Instead of specifying names of characters, what the logline needs  to do is specify a plot.  It needs to answer the basic questions: What is the protagonist’s objective goal?  Who/what opposes him in his struggle to attain that objective goal?  What are the stakes — what does he stand to win if he attains his objective goal, lose if he fails?

dpg Singularity Reviewed on November 25, 2015.
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