Survivors of the premature reformation of the supercontinent Pangaea tell their stories of the days after the disaster.


Lauren Penpusher Asked on September 14, 2015 in Public.
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The film sets up an interesting situation. But “tell their stories” amounts to a string of pearls — a collection of incidents.

A logline is not just about the pearls — it’s also about the string — the plot that links the pearls. What is the plot that arises from the situation that unifies all the incidents in a cause-and-effect sequence?

And who is the lead character?

dpg Singularity Reviewed on September 14, 2015.
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This sounds like a documentary or mocumentary. If it is a story it should be told through the eyes of a character. Listen to the last few “scriptnotes” podcast. It is really good and talks about how to tell big stories using characters.

CraigDGriffiths Overlord Reviewed on September 14, 2015.
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This would make an interesting anthology movie, like Twilight Zone: The Movie.

Three stories about people who are linked in some way and their interaction telling a “fourth” story that encompasses the whole, like Pulp Fiction.

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on September 14, 2015.
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Who is the main character and what does he or she want?

Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on September 29, 2015.
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