The dying emperor of a crumbling galactic empire struggles to hold onto power amidst political intrigue and a coming war.

    Dark Empire

    martinreese Penpusher Asked on March 19, 2013 in Public.
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      I do get a sense of stetting and a hint of story from this logline, However It would be good if you told us what he was struggling against. His ambition son? A longtime rival? A galactic insurgency?

      Still I really like the idea, good luck with this!

      Richiev Singularity Reviewed on March 19, 2013.
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      Like Star Wars but from the emperors view !! I LOVE IT

      The only suggestion would be to try and be more specific with the struggle as Richiev mentioned..

      Happy writing 😀

      Tor

      Default Reviewed on March 19, 2013.
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        Like Star Wars BUT from the Emperors point of view!! I LOVE IT

        Tor Dollhouse Default Reviewed on March 19, 2013.
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          Your logline just identify the setting – the situation on the beginning and what’s at stakes. But it does not tell a story. Identify an antagonist (not necessarily a person), but there is that missing “so he must – “

          JanCabal Samurai Reviewed on March 20, 2013.
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