The more I think on this the more I don’t like it… The protagonist needs a flaw or something he needs to overcome. Goals,obstacles and antagonist aren’t shown the hook isn’t strong enough…
wish I could delete this logline.
When a disillusioned hacker is freed from a virtual dream world controlled by evil machines, he must fight the machines’ virtual agents to free humanity.
Freed from a simulated dream world controlled by evil machines, a disillusioned hacker must fight virtual agents in bullet-time to free humanity.
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