The fight for the future begins when a computer hacker learns the world exists in the sophisticated alternate reality of a computer program called The Matrix

The Matrix

Andrew Bates Penpusher Asked on September 11, 2012 in Examples.
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The more I think on this the more I don’t like it…
The protagonist needs a flaw or something he needs to overcome.
Goals,obstacles and antagonist aren’t shown
the hook isn’t strong enough…

wish I could delete this logline.

Andrew Bates Penpusher Reviewed on September 21, 2012.
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When a disillusioned hacker is freed from a virtual dream world controlled by evil machines, he must fight the machines’ virtual agents to free humanity.

patrockable Default Reviewed on December 2, 2012.
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Freed from a simulated dream world controlled by evil machines, a disillusioned hacker must fight virtual agents in bullet-time to free humanity.

patrockable Default Reviewed on December 2, 2012.
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