Things get dicey when a hitman finds himself sitting with the man who hired him and his proposed victim at a small town diner.

stumptown Penpusher Asked on December 9, 2015 in Drama.
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This logline sets up a situation.  But the situation is only the 1st element of a plot.  And a logline  should be a succinct description of an entire plot, not just a situation.

So what happens next?  What specifically becomes the plot as a result of this set up?  What are the stakes — for the the hit man?

dpg Singularity Reviewed on December 9, 2015.

Excellent point. Thanks for the comment.

on December 9, 2015.
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What does the main character want and what is stopping him.?

CraigDGriffiths Overlord Reviewed on December 14, 2015.

The main character wants t save the life of the girl he was hired to kill (and his own life). The mobster who hired him is what’s stopping him.

on December 23, 2015.
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