Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.
I love this concept. I’d see this movie. The longline tells me everything I want to know, and I’d buy into the script, The only thing I’d straighten out and sharpen in this concept is the spelling of ‘straight’. Great idea.