What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?

Darkthorn Penpusher Asked on September 25, 2015 in Thriller.
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This is more of a tagline than a logline.

A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.

priggy Logliner Reviewed on September 29, 2015.
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I love this concept. I’d see this movie.
The longline tells me everything I want to know, and I’d buy into the script,
The only thing I’d straighten out and sharpen in this concept is the spelling of ‘straight’.
Great idea.

Gill Penpusher Reviewed on September 26, 2015.
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