.I would take out mysterious and maybe add a new twist like: She has a silver bullet bomb implanted in her chest and if she doesn’t break the curse the first time she changes, she dies
I agree about cutting “mysterious”: it means nothing. I would cut “one late night” too because it’s not relevant to the plot. I would cut “the person”, in a logline the shorter the better.
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