When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.

White Shadow Penpusher Asked on September 30, 2015 in Drama.
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Hiya,

I think this sounds cute, perhaps the man could be described a little more?

puffin_jacket Penpusher Reviewed on September 30, 2015.
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nice use of context. I also like how you mention your characters insecurities  in the log line.

wheelsonfire101234 Penpusher Reviewed on September 30, 2015.
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A love story is always a tear mover and heart beater, the story can be made to a feature film…

garyedwards Penpusher Reviewed on September 30, 2015.
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Hello
Try to include a better description of “the man”.

FFF Mentor Reviewed on September 30, 2015.
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Hellow White Shadow,

I would like his “foxy lady” being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority… I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen…

Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Samurai Reviewed on October 13, 2015.
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