When a newspaper reporter's dreams are haunted by a ghost, he must find her killer to stop his nightmares.

    Retribution

    Clint Cure Penpusher Asked on June 19, 2015 in Public.
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      too vague.
      what ghost?
      what killer?

      FFF Mentor Reviewed on June 19, 2015.
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      I think you need a little more detail. How about something like this:

      ‘When a newspaper reporter is driven mad by dreams of the ghost of a beautiful woman, he must track down her killer and bring him/her to justice to relieve his nightmares and restore his sanity.’

      Default Reviewed on June 19, 2015.
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        The girls ghost. You find out who the killer is later.

        Clint Cure Penpusher Reviewed on June 19, 2015.
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          The newspaper reporter doesn’t add to the story at the moment, a man, works and removes unneeded detail. You now have room for detail that moves the story further action and goal.

          CraigDGriffiths Overlord Reviewed on June 19, 2015.
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