When a Nigerian hooker working in Dubai escapes barely with her life after killing a man in self-defense, she makes a vow to wreak as much havoc as she can against the rich, corrupt and powerful in an all-out battle between the haves and have-nots.

The Desert Playground

Samuel Foy Default Asked on August 7, 2013 in Student Loglines.
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Hey Sam I like your idea. it makes for a thrilling story. Maybe you could say as much with fewer words. Cheers.

Marcus Hyndes Default Reviewed on August 8, 2013.
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I miss some flaw of the protagonist. How much havoc can really a Nigerian hooker cause at Dubai, where women are so restricted in all aspects of public life? Perhaps she can be a luxury prostitute and therefore she has few contacts here and there? Making a vow is a good inciting incident, but there needs to be more, some hook. What are the stakes? Vow doesn’t give us any stakes. But murder of some high-profile man can set her tail on fire and she decides to run or fight back – or she will get killed!

JanCabal Default Reviewed on August 11, 2013.
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