When a pregnant woman goes missing, her hospital phobic boyfriend must escape a doomed abortion clinic before she succumbs to its long forgotten curse.

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Lucius Paisley Logliner Asked on June 26, 2014 in Public.
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How is his escaping the abortion clinic going to save the woman? When he finally get’s out will she be set free by what’s holding her? Escape and the woman lives?

Just curious

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on June 26, 2014.
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In your first question you’re basically asking “how does he escape?” Suffice to say, he does, to go into detail would mean telling you the entire story. I’m not going to do that.

To answer your other two questions – When he has escaped, she will have been freed of the curse.

Am I missing these elements in my logline? If so, what would you suggest?

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on June 26, 2014.
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In order to free his girlfriend, the kidnappers demand her hospital phobic boyfriend escape an abortion clinic by morning.

hope that helped, good luck with this!

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on June 26, 2014.
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Sorry, this is my fault.

Why do you assume there are kidnappers?

I have an incident, an action and a goal. Based on these alone, what do I need to include so that this mistake would not be made again?

Lucius Paisley Logliner Reviewed on June 27, 2014.
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Sorry Lucius, It was my fault, I think I read it wrong.

However, I still don’t see the connection between his escaping the abortion clinic and her curse being lifted.

I could see if she had to escape the clinic by morning how it would work but why doesn’t the curse demand he escape for her curse to be lifted?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on June 27, 2014.
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