When an institutionalized shopaholic finds out that the perverse clinical director use his patients as guinea pigs in a medical trial meant to increase consumerism habits, he must fight his addiction to sabotage the experiment and escape from the clinic.

Escape From The Mall / Dr. Foulashop Or How I Learned To Stop Warrying And Shop Happily

FFF Mentor Asked on April 23, 2015 in Public.
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The main problem with this logline is, you have to read it a couple times to understand it.

These phrases are a bit confusing or awkward:

ruined shopaholic
crazy addiction treatment center
serum of mass consumption
regain the civilized world

I would try saying the same thing but in a clearer manner in order to get your story across.

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on April 24, 2015.
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what about:

“When an institutionalized shopaholic finds out that the perverse clinical director use his patients as guinea pigs in a medical trial meant to increase consumerism habits, he must fight his addiction to sabotage the experiment and escape from the clinic.”

FFF Mentor Reviewed on April 24, 2015.
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What’s the genre? Comedy?

dpg Singularity Reviewed on April 25, 2015.
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It’s a comedy, like dr. strangelove.

FFF Mentor Reviewed on April 26, 2015.
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