When a timid janitor's fiance is kidnapped by a fire demon, he must locate the mythical artifact, uncover its power and save his partner before the devil's army scorches the earth.

Horn of the Levithan

Andrew Bates Penpusher Asked on September 13, 2012 in Public.
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When a timid janitor’s fiance is kidnapped by a fire demon, he must locate a mythical artifact, uncover its power and save his partner before the devil’s army scorches the earth

Andrew Bates Penpusher Reviewed on September 13, 2012.
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I like this a lot, dude. I’m just not convinced with the word ‘partner’ which hints at ”cop” – but what are the alternatives: lover, girlfriend, sweetheart, loved one…

Apart from that I think it rocks!

Filmstar Default Reviewed on September 13, 2012.
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When a timid janitor’s fiance is kidnapped by a fire demon, he must locate a mythical artifact, uncover its power and save his lover before the devil’s army scorches the earth

Andrew Bates Penpusher Reviewed on September 13, 2012.
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Thanks, fella.

Andrew Bates Penpusher Reviewed on September 13, 2012.
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hey I like it as it stands – and wanna see the film already ! However I wonder if the threat can be more personal – scorch the earth sounds bad, but if the devil’s army were going to gang rape her and sacrifice her to Lucifer before scorching the earth…

Maybe that’s a bit overboard !

Filmstar Default Reviewed on September 13, 2012.
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