When a young girl wakes up in the forest, struggling to remember what brought her there and made her pass out, a friend appears to help her get back home.
The genre is horror. What’s so horrible about a friend appearing to help her get back home? I’m guessing that the ‘friend’ turns out to be her worst nightmare incarnate. But I shouldn’t have to guess that. The logline should tell me. What is the nature of the threat this ‘friend’ poses. What must she do about it?
When I read the logline I immediately figured out that her friend was behind of what happened to her. dpg guessed it to. So if that’s your twist then it’s not a very good one.
I also don’t think the drug will be a big surprise either.
That said I think you should go with the second logline that you posted. But I would explain better what the friend does to the young woman. It’s a horror movie so does he torture her? What horrible things does he do to her?