When an ambitious underdog makes a pact with the devil, each time he accepts to restrain his freedom to go to some place, the devil grants him a wish, but as he buys his rise in society, his world become smaller and smaller, until he realizes the real consequences for him, his relatives, and humanity and that he needs to break the spell.

    Running with the Land

    FFF Mentor Asked on June 25, 2015 in Public.
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      When a schemer deals with the Devil to restrain his range of travelling each time he rises in society, the world shrinks until he realizes the consequences and he needs to break the spell.

      Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Samurai Reviewed on October 1, 2015.
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        Not sure of the story. Is it his rise in society at all costs, is it the relationship with real estate agent or is it the impact on other. What is his ultimate goal?

        The story is unclear in this logline.

        Plus selling real estate having an impact on humanity? The consequences don’t easily link to the story as described.

        Wish I had more specific suggestions.

        CraigDGriffiths Summitry Reviewed on June 25, 2015.
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          I’m confused, unable to make heads or tails of the logline.

          dpg Singularity Reviewed on June 25, 2015.
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            Thanks for the feedback. I see it was not clear so I rewrote it –

            FFF Mentor Reviewed on June 25, 2015.
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