When an ambitious underdog makes a pact with the devil, each time he accepts to restrain his freedom to go to some place, the devil grants him a wish, but as he buys his rise in society, his world become smaller and smaller, until he realizes the real consequences for him, his relatives, and humanity and that he needs to break the spell.
Not sure of the story. Is it his rise in society at all costs, is it the relationship with real estate agent or is it the impact on other. What is his ultimate goal?
The story is unclear in this logline.
Plus selling real estate having an impact on humanity? The consequences don’t easily link to the story as described.
Wish I had more specific suggestions.
Still confusing. It seems to be a story in the mold of the Faustian bargain, someone makes a pack with Devil, doesn’t read the fine print or the price tag until it’s too late. But what’s so special about this story, what differentiates it from all the other stories about people who are greedy and foolish enough to make deals with the Devil?