When her daughter is taken by nanobot creatures, an irresponsible scientist mother must venture beyond the city's walls and find the creature's lair to get her back.
I like the imagery here. I think you should have a closer look at the set up though. Is the mothers fault her daughter had been kidnapped? Is there something she has to overcome to rescue her? Is there an adjective for the nanobots to make them more interesting?
Hi Andrewclau. I think the relationship with the daughter and mother should be highlighted a little more. They could be estranged and the mother has to learn more about her daughter to track her down. Or, the mother and daughter could work together to stop the robots, which forces them to confront their past and why they’re estranged.