When his bride loses her memory of him a week before the wedding, an unromantic guy's guy must restore it by recreating their courtship’s most romantic moments or face losing the love of his life.
What sort of amnesia?
* Anterograde amnesia
* Retrograde amnesia
* Post-traumatic amnesia
* Dissociative amnesia
* Lacunar amnesia
Controlling when someone is getting his/her memory back is stuff for movies, it’s not reality. You can’t predict how long it takes for someone to get his/her memory back, even if you help faith a bit..
But I would say to this guy’s guy: Good luck!!
this is a pretty good logline!
There’s irony (a guy’s guy who need to repeat his romantic moments),
an inciting event (the amnesia), a clear goal (to marry the girl).
There’s a plan too: recreate their romantic moments- will it work? or not? that’s interesting.
I recommend to find a better title whit some irony in it.
I don’t have problems with the realism or unrealism of the amnesia- it’s a comedy right?
Have you seen the horrible movie where Harrison Ford loose his memory and his wife become a stranger to him? Try to avoid the same errors 🙂
You can improve your logline with a little rewriting to have a better writing style, making it even shorter and funnier. I would avoid ‘unromantic’ for 2 reasons: 1st, it’s implicit in “guy’s guy”, 2nd, you say he had romantic moments so it’s a bit confusing. I suggest to change “face loosing” with just “loosing”.