When Jacob, a genteel theater actor, becomes a mob boss through mistaken identity. He is forced to work with Mia a police detective, in order to incarcerate the notorious Big Bamzy and save his own life.This is a logline for the narrative of a 10 episode TV comedy series.

    ‘Tough House’.

    Nir Shelter Singularity Asked on August 24, 2013 in Public.
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      Drop the when, it’s not needed, and makes the first sentance ready funky. Unless you add a comma after identity, and lowercase the h in he. Don;t take this the wrong way, this idea has been done time-and-time again. Maybe think of a twist to incoperate, and seperate yours from the rest.

      Judah Ray Samurai Reviewed on February 1, 2017.
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        Thought I’d mention that the last sentence is not part of the logline and was mistakenly pasted with the logline submission but I only realized after submitting it.
        Thanks Nir.

        Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on August 24, 2013.
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          Names are not necessary.
          When a genteel theater actor becomes a mob boss through mistaken identity, he is forced to work with a female police detective in order to incarcerate the real criminal and save his own life

          JanCabal Samurai Reviewed on August 24, 2013.
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            When a genteel actor is mistaken for a mob boss, he must work with the police to incarcerate the real mobster and save his life.

            dpg Singularity Reviewed on August 25, 2013.
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