When the king of the elves decides it's time to BECOME, it's up to a haughty Elvin princess to leave the Green Sea and enter the world of the Human "Barbarians" to find her brother, so he can take the throne.

    The Green Sea

    Richiev Singularity Asked on October 25, 2012 in Public.
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      Elves don’t die like humans. When they feel it’s there time, they “Become.” Sort of like Obi Wan in Star Wars when he became one with the force. (Except the elves bodies don’t disappear)

      There is a ceremony with all their friends and loved ones, then they lie down and their spirit becomes one with nature.

      I am not sure how to explain that in a logline but it is important to the story.

      Richiev Singularity Reviewed on October 25, 2012.
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        You lost me at “BECOME.” What does that mean?

        frankiefigs Default Reviewed on October 25, 2012.
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          Is the story about the King? No, it’s about the haughty daughter. How are we going to warm to her if she’s haughty?
          Or is it about the brother? What was the King before he BECAME, anyway?

          Glyn Carter Default Reviewed on October 25, 2012.
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            Good point Glyn,

            The story is about prejudices. The Elvin princess believes humans to be uncouth barbarians, the last thing she wants to do is travel to the human world.

            It is a coming of age story, in spite the fact the “Green Sea” is huge, She is sheltered, she has never met a human before. Through the story she leans that many of her preconceptions about humans were wrong.

            Richiev Singularity Reviewed on October 25, 2012.
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