After his older brother has disappeared, a space cadet and his crew must rescue him from monsters who might be after them.

Question 1

After his older brother has disappeared, a space cadet and his crew must rescue him from monsters who might be after them.

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Tony Byrd Penpusher Posted 2 hours ago in SciFi.

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Question 2

When an ex-soldier comes to meet his son who was born of rape during the war, he must convince the mother (the woman he raped) that his intentions are clear. (SHORT FILM)

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Rueful Penpusher Posted 1 day ago in Drama.

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Question 3

A young man accepts the body switch offered from a cult member in order to start a run away from his pregnant girlfriend and start a new life. Little did he knows that the new body requires constant supplies of human hearts. Meanwhile, his old body replaced him at home as cult members have their own plans with his girlfriend.

To be honest, I have no idea how to write a longline for this story. The concept is about …

Naverich Penpusher Posted 1 day ago in Horror.

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Question 4

Ruby Fox, an electrokinetic woman, has to must discover the truth of her twisted past to save her daughter, who the government claims does not exist.

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ejwunderbar Penpusher Posted 2 days ago in SciFi.

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Question 5

A college student and his girlfriend moves to an apartment, spies on their neighbors who happens to be a serial killer only to find out one of them invades their home.

Look Who’s Watching

Tony Byrd Penpusher Posted 2 days ago in Thriller.

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Question 6

When an ATC controller is contacted by the flight on which his troubled younger brother crashed 13 years ago, he must convince the pilot to get his brother on the radio to make amends, and find out why his body was never found.

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Karel Segers Samurai Posted 2 days ago in Thriller.

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Question 7

–A young widow vowed to protect her husband’s sacred family heirloom but later becomes a target of a ruthless adversary who wants to kill her and take the emblem.

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melissahudson2011 Penpusher Posted 2 days ago in Thriller.

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Question 8

A mermaid is allowed to spend six days on land with a man whom she fell in love with while saving him from drowning.

(24 words) Splash (1984)

dpg Singularity Posted 3 days ago in Comedy, Examples, Romance.

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Question 9

Cuando una madre muere de cáncer, su hija queda al cuidado de su padre y su calculadora tía, que acaba convirtiéndose en su madrastra y la maltrata duramente. La hija descubre como liberarse y acabar con ella gracias a un libro que dejó su madre.

When a mother dies of cancer, her daughter is taken care of by her father and her calculating aunt, who …

cjiro Penpusher Posted 3 days ago in Drama.

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Question 10

A mobster take down drug lords and rescues a former child actor before he dies.

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Tony Byrd Penpusher Posted 3 days ago in Action.

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Answer 1

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Answer 2

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After his older brother has disappeared, a space cadet and his crew must rescue him from monsters who might be after them.

When an ex-soldier comes to meet his son who was born of rape during the war, he must convince the mother (the woman he raped) that his intentions are clear. (SHORT FILM)

Ruby Fox, an electrokinetic woman, has to must discover the truth of her twisted past to save her daughter, who the government claims does not exist.

A college student and his girlfriend moves to an apartment, spies on their neighbors who happens to be a serial killer only to find out one of them invades their home.

When an ATC controller is contacted by the flight on which his troubled younger brother crashed 13 years ago, he must convince the pilot to get his brother on the radio to make amends, and find out why his body was never found.

–A young widow vowed to protect her husband’s sacred family heirloom but later becomes a target of a ruthless adversary who wants to kill her and take the emblem.

A mermaid is allowed to spend six days on land with a man whom she fell in love with while saving him from drowning.

Cuando una madre muere de cáncer, su hija queda al cuidado de su padre y su calculadora tía, que acaba convirtiéndose en su madrastra y la maltrata duramente. La hija descubre como liberarse y acabar con ella gracias a un libro que dejó su madre.

A mobster take down drug lords and rescues a former child actor before he dies.

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Top Logliners

Welcome to “Logline It!”

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.

LATEST NEWS AND NOTICES

RESOURCES

Top Reviewers

LATEST REVIEW

Top Logliners

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline.
Make sure to start here.