Looking for advice/approval on the following logline I created. Thank you!!“After being turned into a beast in a neo-gothic world, a fearless woman disguised as a woman seeks revenge against the cult who sacrificed her during the next hunt.”What do you think? criticism and help would be greatly appreciated.

Question 1

Looking for advice/approval on the following logline I created. Thank you!!“After being turned into a beast in a neo-gothic world, a fearless woman disguised as a woman seeks revenge against the cult who sacrificed her during the next hunt.”What do you think? criticism and help would be greatly appreciated.

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xxunmercifulxx Penpusher Posted 14 hours ago in Horror.

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Question 2

After aiding the misjudged conviction to those responsible for his families death, an undisputed private investigator has one week to prove their innocence, to save his kidnapped adopted daughter’s life

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David Penpusher Posted 14 hours ago in Thriller.

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Question 3

After the misjudged conviction to those responsible for his families death, an undisputed private investigator has 1week to prove their innocence, or his kidnapped recently adopted daughter dies.

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David Penpusher Posted 15 hours ago in Thriller.

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Question 4

Picked up by social services after years of living off the grid, a veteran suffering from PTSD and his teenage daughter struggle to integrate into society.

(26 words) Leave No Trace (2018) Genre: drama

dpg Singularity Posted 2 days ago in Examples.

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Question 5

A discredited private investigator has a chance at redemption after the missing dead body of his enemies child who happens to be his former boss.

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David Penpusher Posted 3 days ago in Thriller.

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Question 6

A quirky, slightly neurotic writer must overcome years of social anxiety and isolation in order to win the heart of the man she loves.

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melsher Penpusher Posted 3 days ago in Comedy.

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Question 7

When an army soldier befriends the very Indians he is commissioned to fight, he discovers for the first time, who he truly is.

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olin fregia Penpusher Posted 4 days ago in Examples.

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Question 8

A true story, a man jailed twenty-six years for a crime his twin committed fights a choice: exact sweet revenge on his brother or forgive him to be fully and finally free.

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olin fregia Penpusher Posted 4 days ago in Drama.

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Question 9

A reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.

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thedarkhorse Samurai Posted 6 days ago in Comedy.

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Question 10

An entire town wakes up with dissociative amnesia and is told to be a part of a voluntary social experiment; when one member of the town begins to suspect they are being held against their will, he launches a secret investigation to rediscover his past.

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Anthony Nelson Penpusher Posted 6 days ago in Thriller.

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Answer 1

I would watch your tenses:"...against the cult who sacrificed her (Past tense, this already happened) during the 'next' hunt." (Future...

Answer 2

I would watch your tenses:"...against the cult who sacrificed her (Past tense, this already happened) during the 'next' hunt." (Future...

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After aiding the misjudged conviction to those responsible for his families death, an undisputed private investigator has one week to prove their innocence, to save his kidnapped adopted daughter’s life

After the misjudged conviction to those responsible for his families death, an undisputed private investigator has 1week to prove their innocence, or his kidnapped recently adopted daughter dies.

Picked up by social services after years of living off the grid, a veteran suffering from PTSD and his teenage daughter struggle to integrate into society.

A discredited private investigator has a chance at redemption after the missing dead body of his enemies child who happens to be his former boss.

A quirky, slightly neurotic writer must overcome years of social anxiety and isolation in order to win the heart of the man she loves.

When an army soldier befriends the very Indians he is commissioned to fight, he discovers for the first time, who he truly is.

A true story, a man jailed twenty-six years for a crime his twin committed fights a choice: exact sweet revenge on his brother or forgive him to be fully and finally free.

A reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.

An entire town wakes up with dissociative amnesia and is told to be a part of a voluntary social experiment; when one member of the town begins to suspect they are being held against their will, he launches a secret investigation to rediscover his past.

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Welcome to “Logline It!”

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.

LATEST ARTICLES

RESOURCES

Top Reviewers

LATEST REVIEW

Top Logliners

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline.
Make sure to start here.