(REVISION #6): When a naïve, rambunctious teenage singer in the early sixties in England succumbs to the seductive excesses of the Rock’n Roll lifestyle, she ends up pregnant and is pressured to get an illegal abortion that changes her life forever.

Question 1

(REVISION #6): When a naïve, rambunctious teenage singer in the early sixties in England succumbs to the seductive excesses of the Rock’n Roll lifestyle, she ends up pregnant and is pressured to get an illegal abortion that changes her life forever.

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jaheagle Penpusher Posted 3 mins ago in Drama.

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Question 2

(REVISION #5) England 1963. When a naïve teenager launches a singing career with her sister, she is overwhelmed by the seductive excesses of the Rock’n Roll lifestyle. She falls in love, loses her virginity, finds out her boyfriend is married, gets drunk, has revenge sex, ends up pregnant and has to make a difficult decision that will change her life forever.

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jaheagle Penpusher Posted 9 hours ago in Drama.

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Question 3

In a future where attention is the new currency, an introverted high school junior struggles to maintain a low profile when the release of a slandered film prompts violent plans from his socially ostracized peers.

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dnunez525 Penpusher Posted 14 hours ago in Student Loglines.

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Question 4

When a young assassin discovers a conspiracy that could destroy the very nation she swore to serve, the hunter becomes the hunted when she becomes the target of the organization that raised her.

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huldar2 Penpusher Posted 21 hours ago in Student Loglines.

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Question 5

When he discovers an abandoned project car, a former street racer , and young father must use the car to help his invert daughter get over her first breakup .

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DonArt Penpusher Posted 24 hours ago in Student Loglines.

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Question 6

(Revision #4) England 1963. When two teenage sisters, sibling rivals, secure a recording contract that launches their singing career, they soon discover that the Rock’n Roll lifestyle is full of seductive excesses that may destroy their dream of fame and fortune.

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jaheagle Penpusher Posted 2 days ago in Drama.

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Question 7

A high school dance challenges, socially awkward teen, to ask is jealous best friend for dancing lessons, after being asked out by the most popular girl in school.

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DonArt Penpusher Posted 2 days ago in Student Loglines.

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Question 8

When she allows her husband’s overdose, a neglectful young mother must embark on a journey of recovery or risk losing her children to the system forever.

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Packgrl Penpusher Posted 4 days ago in Coming of Age.

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Question 9

When teenage twins raised on different sides of the track, discover each other, they decide to swap lives temporarily, just to get a taste of what seems a better life but only one wants to return back.

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kpetrakis01 Samurai Posted 4 days ago in Family.

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Question 10

A guilt-ridden psychiatrist delves into the occult to save his family when the evil spirit of a patient who killed himself haunts them.

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carlan Penpusher Posted 4 days ago in Thriller.

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(REVISION #6): When a naïve, rambunctious teenage singer in the early sixties in England succumbs to the seductive excesses of the Rock’n Roll lifestyle, she ends up pregnant and is pressured to get an illegal abortion that changes her life forever.

In a future where attention is the new currency, an introverted high school junior struggles to maintain a low profile when the release of a slandered film prompts violent plans from his socially ostracized peers.

When a young assassin discovers a conspiracy that could destroy the very nation she swore to serve, the hunter becomes the hunted when she becomes the target of the organization that raised her.

When he discovers an abandoned project car, a former street racer , and young father must use the car to help his invert daughter get over her first breakup .

(Revision #4) England 1963. When two teenage sisters, sibling rivals, secure a recording contract that launches their singing career, they soon discover that the Rock’n Roll lifestyle is full of seductive excesses that may destroy their dream of fame and fortune.

A high school dance challenges, socially awkward teen, to ask is jealous best friend for dancing lessons, after being asked out by the most popular girl in school.

When she allows her husband’s overdose, a neglectful young mother must embark on a journey of recovery or risk losing her children to the system forever.

When teenage twins raised on different sides of the track, discover each other, they decide to swap lives temporarily, just to get a taste of what seems a better life but only one wants to return back.

A guilt-ridden psychiatrist delves into the occult to save his family when the evil spirit of a patient who killed himself haunts them.

LATEST REVIEW

Top Logliners

Welcome to “Logline It!”

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.

LATEST ARTICLES

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Top Reviewers

LATEST REVIEW

Top Logliners

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline.
Make sure to start here.