RE: A talented lonely man falls in love with his soulmate but everyday fighting brings out her past and his imaginary future.

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      thommymorais@gmail.com Penpusher Posted on April 30, 2020 in Drama.
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        So i would change talented for passionate. I guess he was lonely before he met her but scared to get back there since they’re fighting a lot. In the story we see the present(love/fighting) but her past his her problem with ex husband who is still in the picture and family trouble coming back with him trying to make her come true with it all. His imaginary future is the life he sees with her. What it could be if they would just fully accept each( because deep down they’re meant for each other). What makes it all happen is yea. The fact that he’s never had this before but knows THIS is the one. So how could I make it better?

        Penpusher Answered on May 1, 2020.
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