RE: A talented lonely man falls in love with his soulmate but everyday fighting brings out her past and his imaginary future.

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      Would love to hear from you what you think of this logline. 

      thommymorais@gmail.com Penpusher Posted on April 30, 2020 in Drama.
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        Its all too vague. What is the man’s talent? How does the talent help or hinder his relationship with his soulmate? Why is he lonely when he sees his soulmate every day? What kind of future does he imagine? What event in her past stands in the way? Finally, why does this bother him today if it didn’t yesterday or last week or last year? What incident kicks the ball rolling?

        Remember, a logline has to distinguish your film from others, so specifics are your friends.

        Mentor Answered on April 30, 2020.
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