RE: A teenage loner meets his first love during lucid dreams and will have to choose between dream and reality, to be awaken without her or to never wake up.
A teenager meets the love of his life in his dreams – and must figure out a way to be with her, before/or else…
I think you need to lean into the specifics of what’s going on.
I know you don’t want to reveal too much in the logline – but you do need to get specific if you want it to pop/conjure up the correct images in the reader’s head/be as strong and potent as possible.
Again – I do really love the concept.
Good luck with everything!
Keep working on it. The answer is always there. It’s just hiding 😉