RE: A teenage loner meets his first love during lucid dreams and will have to choose between dream and reality, to be awaken without her or to never wake up.

      officialfrankromeo Penpusher Posted on May 8, 2020 in Romance.
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        Okay…

        A teenager meets the love of his life in his dreams – and must figure out a way to be with her, before/or else…

        I think you need to lean into the specifics of what’s going on.

        I know you don’t want to reveal too much in the logline – but you do need to get specific if you want it to pop/conjure up the correct images in the reader’s head/be as strong and potent as possible.

        Again – I do really love the concept.

        Good luck with everything!

        Keep working on it. The answer is always there. It’s just hiding 😉

        Mentor Answered on May 9, 2020.
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