RE: After being built as a cyborg by a fellow vampire, a young woman must race against time to kill vampires who tries to invade her town so that she can be human again.
Maybe I’m missing something but this logline is confusing.
If I work hard at it, this is what I was able to glean:
MC – young woman.
Inciting event – being turned into a cyborg.
Goal – become human again.
I shouldn’t need to struggle to understand the premise, so even if the above is correct, the logline isn’t working.
What’s the cause and effect? How will killing vampires turn her back into being human?