RE: When a neglected daughter is adopted by a wealthy and powerful man, she must fight her reckless, power hungry mother to keep her new world from falling apart.

Leviathan Samurai Asked on December 3, 2018 in Drama.
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Agreed with all the above.

Also, in what way will her world fall apart?
The term is too vague to work well in a logline. Describe one SPECIFIC and clear danger the mother poses and use that to establish the stakes.

Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on December 5, 2018.
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