After being threatened by an unknown adversary, a vampire warlord if forced to move against his rivals else it would mean certain death for him and his kin.

Question 1

After being threatened by an unknown adversary, a vampire warlord if forced to move against his rivals else it would mean certain death for him and his kin.

Chris_P Penpusher Posted on December 25, 2018 in Fantasy.

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Question 2

When a mysterious woman threatens to break everything he has strived for, Aldrin must either overcome their differences or the hopes and dreams of his people will die with him.

Chris_P Penpusher Posted on December 25, 2018 in Fantasy.

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3 reviews
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Question 3

An aged out of foster care is victim of psychic attacks on his path to become rich in the city of poker while a group of magic bandids plot to heist the casino.

oceanlegends Penpusher Posted on December 5, 2018 in Fantasy.

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1 reviews
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Question 4

a young rain-maker must quickly master her abilities to save the kingdom from the Ruler of storms

lydia mugure Penpusher Posted on November 16, 2018 in Fantasy.

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5 reviews
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Question 5

Revised (Round 2)- After a tragedy in London, Ohio, sends a dead soldier to the Veil World of the Supernatural, The soldier must stop a werewolf from entering the veil and destroying reality and exposing the supernatural to world, provoking chaos and destruction.

Leviathan Samurai Posted on November 6, 2018 in Fantasy.

455 views
5 reviews
-1 votes

Question 6

A strong teenage girl begins training at a unique academy to fight the Gods who are trying to kill her family and her.

Leviathan Samurai Posted on November 5, 2018 in Fantasy.

375 views
4 reviews
0 votes

Question 7

After being discharged for unauthorized actions, the wolf soldier works as a security guard for a rich CEO until he is ordered to take down a terrorist group in his hometown hellbent on destroying the Queen.

Leviathan Samurai Posted on October 30, 2018 in Fantasy.

283 views
5 reviews
0 votes

Question 8

After Mankind’s potential for good, The Son of the Devil, in defiance of his father, arrives in Los Angeles to send the supernatural creatures back to hell before they take over the city and find the hole in the Gateway before they take over the world.

Leviathan Samurai Posted on October 28, 2018 in Fantasy.

477 views
5 reviews
-1 votes

Question 9

Through interference with dimensional aliens, several lost Roman legions is transported to a brutal world of magics, monsters, and hellish creatures and must fight to reshape the world in the name of Caesar and Rome.

t3xx3r Logliner Posted on October 12, 2018 in Fantasy.

161 views
4 reviews
0 votes

Question 10

Famine in rural Ireland forces a loving father to make a dark deal with a pagan spiritual entity to feed his family. When the bond is broken he must choose between losing his child or his soul to settle his debt.

Jonathan Wynne Penpusher Posted on September 23, 2018 in Fantasy.

379 views
5 reviews
0 votes

Answer 1

This logline is a little confusing, I would take out '1983' because as written it reads as if the story...

Answer 2

This logline is a little confusing, I would take out '1983' because as written it reads as if the story...

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After being threatened by an unknown adversary, a vampire warlord if forced to move against his rivals else it would mean certain death for him and his kin.

When a mysterious woman threatens to break everything he has strived for, Aldrin must either overcome their differences or the hopes and dreams of his people will die with him.

An aged out of foster care is victim of psychic attacks on his path to become rich in the city of poker while a group of magic bandids plot to heist the casino.

a young rain-maker must quickly master her abilities to save the kingdom from the Ruler of storms

Revised (Round 2)- After a tragedy in London, Ohio, sends a dead soldier to the Veil World of the Supernatural, The soldier must stop a werewolf from entering the veil and destroying reality and exposing the supernatural to world, provoking chaos and destruction.

A strong teenage girl begins training at a unique academy to fight the Gods who are trying to kill her family and her.

After being discharged for unauthorized actions, the wolf soldier works as a security guard for a rich CEO until he is ordered to take down a terrorist group in his hometown hellbent on destroying the Queen.

After Mankind’s potential for good, The Son of the Devil, in defiance of his father, arrives in Los Angeles to send the supernatural creatures back to hell before they take over the city and find the hole in the Gateway before they take over the world.

Through interference with dimensional aliens, several lost Roman legions is transported to a brutal world of magics, monsters, and hellish creatures and must fight to reshape the world in the name of Caesar and Rome.

Famine in rural Ireland forces a loving father to make a dark deal with a pagan spiritual entity to feed his family. When the bond is broken he must choose between losing his child or his soul to settle his debt.

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Welcome to “Logline It!”

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.

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RESOURCES

Top Reviewers

LATEST REVIEW

Top Logliners

Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline.
Make sure to start here.