A man makes numerous phone calls trying to negotiate his own safety while travelling to his gangster boss to confess his failure, finally having to settle for saving his family from revenge.

Question 1

A man makes numerous phone calls trying to negotiate his own safety while travelling to his gangster boss to confess his failure, finally having to settle for saving his family from revenge.

CraigDGriffiths Summitry Posted on September 18, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 2

A drifter finds some stability in his life when he is granted a job as a bartender for Tokyo’s premiere hotel, the Tengen. When a childhood friend is murdered within the alleys of the hotel, the drifter learns that the glitz and glamor of the Tengen is a front for a prominent yakuza organization. Now entwined in the conspiracy, he finds his delicate existence threatened as he is unceremoniously thrust into the criminal underworld of Tokyo.

Adamu95 Penpusher Posted on August 20, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 3

An exiled man falls in love with a woman he’s meant to kill, a 157 year old woman on the run from the authorities.

Daryl Rogerson Penpusher Posted on April 6, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 4

When a young man washes-up dead in a desolate coastal town, his self-centred estranged mother must fight against apathy and hostility to uncover the truth, at the risk of exposing her own culpability.

Voiceofreason Penpusher Posted on March 21, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 5

A smooth talking, but psychologically damaged, criminal with face-blindness rips off a dangerous drug-lord with help from his tough-guy brother. When they are betrayed by their psychopathic accomplice, he must overcome his psychological challenges and track the psychopath through the underground world of experimental hallucinogenic psycho-therapy in order to retrieve the drugs and prevent his brother being murdered.

FreeWill Penpusher Posted on March 13, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 6

When their son’s death triggers his wife’s mental disorder, a man soon discovers his mistress will do anything to get the grieving mother out of the way, and he must choose: his wife or her alter.

Castler Media Samurai Posted on February 23, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 7

A girl searches for the family that owned hers during slavery. On her quest she discovers things really aren’t black and white. Will she exact revenge or die trying.

Shyla Penpusher Posted on February 5, 2018 in Noir.

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1 reviews
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Question 8

A lat-night diner waitress bites off more than she can chew when she tries role-playing with two estranged brothers.

Wyatt_Lamoureux Penpusher Posted on January 17, 2018 in Noir.

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Question 9

The murder of a private investigator in 1930’s California sends his quiet, girl-with-a-past secretary/lover Olivia on the hunt for his killer.

kvela Penpusher Posted on October 27, 2017 in Noir.

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Question 10

When a peaceful political activist meets a mysterious supporter, he resolves to violence to accomplish his goals.

saosci Penpusher Posted on October 8, 2017 in Noir.

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Answer 1

I would watch your tenses:"...against the cult who sacrificed her (Past tense, this already happened) during the 'next' hunt." (Future...

Answer 2

I would watch your tenses:"...against the cult who sacrificed her (Past tense, this already happened) during the 'next' hunt." (Future...

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