Hello Jo. This is my first attempt at a logline review, so I apologize in case I've overstepped. I have a couple of questions that could help me get a better sense of what's going on: 1. Why does the Queen (the antagonist) freeze the village? Is it for fun / cause they won't do what she wants them tRead more
Hello Jo.
This is my first attempt at a logline review, so I apologize in case I’ve overstepped.
I have a couple of questions that could help me get a better sense of what’s going on:
1. Why does the Queen (the antagonist) freeze the village? Is it for fun / cause they won’t do what she wants them to / to spite her sister or someone else? 2. Does the sister have any superpowers? Will she be able to fend for herself? How scared is she of her sister? 3. Does the sister want to rekindle her relationship just so that their village is healed or does she want to mend it for its own sake or are both equally important?
Thank you
Disclaimer: I have not seen the film or read the screenplay.
Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well. “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …” FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader. Take care.
Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well. “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …” FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.
Hi Luke. I see two stories. I like the one where the detective meets a woman who is an exact double of the woman he was having an affair with. His 'second chance at love' can wait until he has solved 'the mystery of her death' and 'the appearance of an exact double' Hope this helps.
Hi Luke.
I see two stories. I like the one where the detective meets a woman who is an exact double of the woman he was having an affair with.
His ‘second chance at love’ can wait until he has solved ‘the mystery of her death’ and ‘the appearance of an exact double’
When a princess’s sister, the queen, flees after freezing their village with her icy powers, the princess must find her sister to heal the village and rekindle their relationship – Frozen.
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Hello Jo. This is my first attempt at a logline review, so I apologize in case I've overstepped. I have a couple of questions that could help me get a better sense of what's going on: 1. Why does the Queen (the antagonist) freeze the village? Is it for fun / cause they won't do what she wants them tRead more
Hello Jo.
This is my first attempt at a logline review, so I apologize in case I’ve overstepped.
I have a couple of questions that could help me get a better sense of what’s going on:
1. Why does the Queen (the antagonist) freeze the village? Is it for fun / cause they won’t do what she wants them to / to spite her sister or someone else?
2. Does the sister have any superpowers? Will she be able to fend for herself? How scared is she of her sister?
3. Does the sister want to rekindle her relationship just so that their village is healed or does she want to mend it for its own sake or are both equally important?
Thank you
Disclaimer: I have not seen the film or read the screenplay.
See lessAs violence and corruption ensues in the underbelly of Lagos, two brothers are divided and forced to reckon with their choices as they fight to escape a life of abject poverty.
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Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well. “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …” FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader. Take care.
Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well.
“Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …”
FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.
Take care.
See lessWhen his affair with the women he was supposed to be trailing ends with her falling to her death from atop a high tower, a retired detective with a pathological fear of falling is given a second chance at love when he meets a woman who is her exact double.
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Hi Luke. I see two stories. I like the one where the detective meets a woman who is an exact double of the woman he was having an affair with. His 'second chance at love' can wait until he has solved 'the mystery of her death' and 'the appearance of an exact double' Hope this helps.
Hi Luke.
I see two stories. I like the one where the detective meets a woman who is an exact double of the woman he was having an affair with.
His ‘second chance at love’ can wait until he has solved ‘the mystery of her death’ and ‘the appearance of an exact double’
Hope this helps.
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