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  1. Asked: July 25, 2021In: Examples

    After being hired to lead a failing breakfast TV show, a talented but undervalued producer is forced to use crazy tactics in order to improve its ratings.

    Nordic12 Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 26, 2021 at 9:25 am

    I am not sure if I should be anticipating a sit com or a clever drama. I think "crazy" leaves some anticipating humor and others, unconventional but clever.

    I am not sure if I should be anticipating a sit com or a clever drama. I think “crazy” leaves some anticipating humor and others, unconventional but clever.

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  2. Asked: July 25, 2021In: Examples

    After discovering that reality is a computer generated prison, a hacker must unleash his own power to save to world.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 25, 2021 at 8:37 pm

    Stick it in Examples if it's an existing movie. What's standing in his way? It sounds way too easy atm.

    Stick it in Examples if it’s an existing movie.

    What’s standing in his way? It sounds way too easy atm.

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  3. Asked: June 6, 2021In: Examples

    A workaholic founder of a super-successful start-up, who’s reluctantly taken up a 70-year-old as an intern, must decide whether to hire an external CEO in her stead, when faced with overwhelming work-life balance pressures.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 12, 2021 at 9:54 pm

    Deciding something is not a goal and if you remove the "who's reluctantly taken up a 70-year-old as an intern" bit, the plot is identical - suggesting that it's not actually necessary. BUT of course it is necessary because the film is about him. Based on what I've looked at re: this film (I haven'tRead more

    Deciding something is not a goal and if you remove the “who’s reluctantly taken up a 70-year-old as an intern” bit, the plot is identical – suggesting that it’s not actually necessary. BUT of course it is necessary because the film is about him.

    Based on what I’ve looked at re: this film (I haven’t seen it) is he actually the protagonist? Or is it a dual protagonist story? Either way, if the film is called “The Intern” then the intern MUST feature heavily in the logline.

    Also, the inciting incident – “when faced with overwhelming…” – this isn’t ONE moment. This is a build over time. So what is the one moment that changes things. Is it the arrival of this new intern? Or something that changes in the office when he arrives?

    Saying “in her stead” makes it sound like she’s leaving… is she?

    Hope this helps.

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