Consider the following: What’s the producer's arc? Looking for more than just a pack mule for this singer. Consider strengthening the America or Bust premise by finding a compelling reason why a French singer would risk whatever to seek fortune in American. Examples: “A once-famous OR down-and-out rRead more
Consider the following: What’s the producer’s arc? Looking for more than just a pack mule for this singer. Consider strengthening the America or Bust premise by finding a compelling reason why a French singer would risk whatever to seek fortune in American. Examples: “A once-famous OR down-and-out record producer [comeback GOAL]…” “… French one-hit-wonder …”. Both parties can find inspiration in each other for their comeback/seek fortune goal.
I am not sure what this story is about, The story begins with the father turning himself in after a jewel heist. Is the story about the trial? Is it about the Jewel thieves attempting to shut up the father? If so that should be in the logline.
I am not sure what this story is about, The story begins with the father turning himself in after a jewel heist. Is the story about the trial? Is it about the Jewel thieves attempting to shut up the father? If so that should be in the logline.
Leaning towards: “An obsessed fan of bygone pop star uses self-hypnosis to travel back in time, but…” You need a complication, finish with “but” with your plot points.
Leaning towards: “An obsessed fan of bygone pop star uses self-hypnosis to travel back in time, but…” You need a complication, finish with “but” with your plot points.
An American record producer helps a French pop singer who is a one hit wonder and faded into obscurity by helping her to come to America and gain success.
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Consider the following: What’s the producer's arc? Looking for more than just a pack mule for this singer. Consider strengthening the America or Bust premise by finding a compelling reason why a French singer would risk whatever to seek fortune in American. Examples: “A once-famous OR down-and-out rRead more
Consider the following:
What’s the producer’s arc? Looking for more than just a pack mule for this singer.
Consider strengthening the America or Bust premise by finding a compelling reason why a French singer would risk whatever to seek fortune in American.
Examples:
“A once-famous OR down-and-out record producer [comeback GOAL]…” “… French one-hit-wonder …”.
Both parties can find inspiration in each other for their comeback/seek fortune goal.
This is your story, hope this helps, take care.
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I am not sure what this story is about, The story begins with the father turning himself in after a jewel heist. Is the story about the trial? Is it about the Jewel thieves attempting to shut up the father? If so that should be in the logline.
I am not sure what this story is about, The story begins with the father turning himself in after a jewel heist. Is the story about the trial? Is it about the Jewel thieves attempting to shut up the father? If so that should be in the logline.
See lessA man uses self hypnosis to travel back in time by uses a portrait of a pop singer who’s young enough to be his daughter to meet and fall in love with her.
Odie
Leaning towards: “An obsessed fan of bygone pop star uses self-hypnosis to travel back in time, but…” You need a complication, finish with “but” with your plot points.
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See less“An obsessed fan of bygone pop star uses self-hypnosis to travel back in time, but…”
You need a complication, finish with “but” with your plot points.