Sounds more like a romance to me! Love the concept. Given that self-forgiveness sometimes plays out for both characters at some point, flipping it to the love-interest's story, this could be their logline: "When a man is heartbroken after the love of his life leaves him and he subconsciously holds oRead more
Sounds more like a romance to me! Love the concept.
Given that self-forgiveness sometimes plays out for both characters at some point, flipping it to the love-interest’s story, this could be their logline:
“When a man is heartbroken after the love of his life leaves him and he subconsciously holds onto her by continuing to work on their dream business, he must break free of his chains and declare his love after realising it is their divine love that brings him true happiness, not the business he has almost killed himself to keep alive.”
Dear Max, it’s been awhile.
Tempest
Sounds more like a romance to me! Love the concept. Given that self-forgiveness sometimes plays out for both characters at some point, flipping it to the love-interest's story, this could be their logline: "When a man is heartbroken after the love of his life leaves him and he subconsciously holds oRead more
Sounds more like a romance to me! Love the concept.
Given that self-forgiveness sometimes plays out for both characters at some point, flipping it to the love-interest’s story, this could be their logline:
“When a man is heartbroken after the love of his life leaves him and he subconsciously holds onto her by continuing to work on their dream business, he must break free of his chains and declare his love after realising it is their divine love that brings him true happiness, not the business he has almost killed himself to keep alive.”
See lessA young man from a conservative family falls in love with an actress who starts her career and dreams of doing Kabuki theater in Japan; but their customs, prejudices and dreams stand up like a wall that will impede their happiness.
Odie
Make this yours, leaning towards: “A young conservative man must transcend cultural prejudices for the love of a Japanese Kabuki actress” Take care.
Make this yours, leaning towards:
“A young conservative man must transcend cultural prejudices for the love of a Japanese Kabuki actress”
Take care.
See lessAn uxorious husband stops at nothing to get his forlorn wife pregnant while he struggles with his resentful adult step-children over their mother’s estate.
zefreno
The logline is to help me finish a university class about writing webisodes. Thanks for your longliners.
The logline is to help me finish a university class about writing webisodes. Thanks for your longliners.
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