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When humans cut down her park tree, a quirky, gray squirrel must join a tribe to make it through winter; but when she causes the death of her chipmunk sidekick and is compelled by her tribe to expel her love interest, she is forced to grow up in order to survive the winter.
The word 'When' usually describes an inciting incident. You have two 'when's' in your logline, indicating two inciting incidents... This is a logline issue. (Or perhaps a story issue)
The word ‘When’ usually describes an inciting incident.
See lessYou have two ‘when’s’ in your logline, indicating two inciting incidents…
This is a logline issue. (Or perhaps a story issue)
Killer Born
What makes this mission almost impossible for
What makes this mission almost impossible for
See lessWith a dying sister in one hand and a game of trust in the other, a young man attempts to find a cure while finding his purpose in a world overseen by a growing top secret crime organization before his sister dies.
He must have only one mission in the logline. And it must feel impossible to solve. What is he actually going to beat? What if we say: In a world overseen by a top secret surveillance organisation - a young man must bring his dying sister from country A to country B without being discovered in orderRead more
He must have only one mission in the logline.
And it must feel impossible to solve.
What is he actually going to beat?
What if we say:
See lessIn a world overseen by a top secret surveillance organisation – a young man must bring his dying sister from country A to country B without being discovered in order to get the cure that can save her life.