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  1. Posted: September 9, 2022In: Adventure

    A good-for-nothing private investigator participates in a 7 day complex scavenger hunt to prove his worth

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 10, 2022 at 2:22 pm

    Hi Arijitaro, What will happen if he does not prove his worth? or why does he have to prove his worth? I can see a conflict/challenge missing somewhere. Am I right? If so, include it and re-write. I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Arijitaro,

    What will happen if he does not prove his worth? or why does he have to prove his worth?

    I can see a conflict/challenge missing somewhere. Am I right? If so, include it and re-write.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: August 29, 2022In: Adventure

    When an orphaned French aristocrat must confront his estranged father, who means to kill him, he is shanghaied by Confederate pirates and cast into the backwoods of the Civil War, where he joins a band of notorious bushwhackers to survive.

    MitchW Logliner
    Added an answer on August 31, 2022 at 8:07 am

    I think the character and inciting incident are there but joining the bushwhackers to survive isn't the greatest. The reason I think this is that it's a very open ended goal. He could continue 'surviving' indefinitely. You need to have an outwardly achievable goal for you main character to achieve.Read more

    I think the character and inciting incident are there but joining the bushwhackers to survive isn’t the greatest. The reason I think this is that it’s a very open ended goal. He could continue ‘surviving’ indefinitely. You need to have an outwardly achievable goal for you main character to achieve. It seems like the confrontation with his father is the true goal so I would add that into the logline rather than just surviving.

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  3. Posted: July 26, 2022In: Adventure

    Soon after WW2, a conman joins a group of treasure-hunters in their search for Hilter’s personal cache, as a deadly Mafia closes in.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on August 25, 2022 at 8:14 pm

    A conman joins a group of adventurers who want to find Hitler's lost treasure while a deadly mob tries to catch up. I hope this helps

    A conman joins a group of adventurers who want to find Hitler’s lost treasure while a deadly mob tries to catch up.

    I hope this helps

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