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When he is denied admission to any of the college for his low grades, he gets an invitation from a mysterious college which was shut down decades ago.
Interesting setup. What’s the goal? You could start with “When an invitation arrives from a long-defunct college, a [subpar/jilted student] [adventure goal].” Make this yours. Take care.
Interesting setup. What’s the goal?
You could start with “When an invitation arrives from a long-defunct college, a [subpar/jilted student] [adventure goal].”
Make this yours. Take care.
See lessA good-for-nothing private investigator participates in a 7 day complex scavenger hunt to prove his worth
Hi Arijitaro, What will happen if he does not prove his worth? or why does he have to prove his worth? I can see a conflict/challenge missing somewhere. Am I right? If so, include it and re-write. I hope this helps Good Luck
Hi Arijitaro,
What will happen if he does not prove his worth? or why does he have to prove his worth?
I can see a conflict/challenge missing somewhere. Am I right? If so, include it and re-write.
I hope this helps
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When an orphaned French aristocrat must confront his estranged father, who means to kill him, he is shanghaied by Confederate pirates and cast into the backwoods of the Civil War, where he joins a band of notorious bushwhackers to survive.
I think the character and inciting incident are there but joining the bushwhackers to survive isn't the greatest. The reason I think this is that it's a very open ended goal. He could continue 'surviving' indefinitely. You need to have an outwardly achievable goal for you main character to achieve.Read more
I think the character and inciting incident are there but joining the bushwhackers to survive isn’t the greatest. The reason I think this is that it’s a very open ended goal. He could continue ‘surviving’ indefinitely. You need to have an outwardly achievable goal for you main character to achieve. It seems like the confrontation with his father is the true goal so I would add that into the logline rather than just surviving.
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